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Mephiles and Iblis, Chapter 1

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It began as a normal day, in that paradise we lived in sice we were born. But it turned out to a day in hell. I felt the pain more than thousands of years before, but not in the way I do now.

Why did it have to happen? What have we all done wrong? I don´t know... we all don´t know. All the peace... gone. Like her and hundreds of others. But she... hadn´t done anything to them! And I thought, my parents were cruel. Did they... enjoy it? Seeing her dying? Seeing her life running out with her blood? I don´t know. And I don´t want to know.

But what I know is this: They´ll all pay. Taking control of our area was one thing, but killing innocent people? Taking away everything we loved, including the one we loved? Those humans... I´ll get them. Even if I have to make a deal with the hell itself.

Even if I have to go through space and time. They´ll pay the price of killing her.

Iblis.

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A girl and a boy were walking near the river. The girl seemed to be amused, so was the boy, too. They both giggled, walking in the shadows of the huge trees, which surronded the little way they were walking.

“Say that again, Iblis, please!”, the boy said. “The crystaline boy will cause massive destruction! Yeah, the destruction of the... ash!” Both started to laugh. The girl was crying because she laughed that hard, the boy already stopped it, he was just smiling.

A fresh breeze went through the leafless trees. The last dead leafs from last winter fell down. “Oh, look. It´s getting brighter! It was about time. This winter was real long and cold. Spring, here we come!” The girl jumped into the air. “Geesh, keep it down, Iblis.”

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The painful flashback ended, and I was looking into the flames again. No, I was looking THROUGH them. My revenge was perfect. Killing that unimportant hedgehog was it worth. Everyone lived in the same fear I was living after the humans had arrived. But now, the last humans feared ME.

But there was one thing that wasn´t expected. A young, really naïve hedgehog and his friend were there. Silver the Hedgehog and Blaze the Cat. They were fighting me. US. The flames, known as Iblis and me. Somehow, they were like US.

But the other way round. Silver reminded me of Iblis. My beloved Iblis. Only her flames survived, her soul. Unleashed into the world, they burned everything away. Her anger hadn´t shrinked. She was the anger-filled flame I knew.

I just decided to play a little bit with these fools. “Exhaust ´em, Iblis, but do not destroy them. That´ll be my turn.” I left the creature made out of flames. Finally, I got my revenge. But... I felt empty. SHE was still missing. Only her soul wasn´t filling the hole, she left when she died. She and me... The unbreakable two.

Iblis and Mephiles.
:cries:

I hate that chapter. It´s just the beginning, so please be nice!
And, I´m not english xD don´t make stupid comments like "Ever heard of a dictionary?" because i lost mine ^^;

:rofl: There´s a pic of Iblis, too. Maybe i´ll put the link in here later XD

So, bye for now XD

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